Almost Halloweensie

Boo hoo! This is NOT an acceptable entry  for Susanna Hill’s Halloweensie Contest (over by 4 words), but I thought I’d post my adaptation of a Storytime action-rhyme for teachers, parents, librarians – or another bookseller! – who might enjoy boo-hooing with toddlers too!

To read all the entries, click HERE

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21 thoughts on “Almost Halloweensie

  1. Awww…cute interactive poem for young punkins! You could easily make this eligible for the contest by deleting “as” at the beginning of each second and fourth lines. Cuts your count by 10.

    cwm

    On Thu, Oct 27, 2016 at 7:12 PM, julie rowan-zoch wrote:

    > julie rowan zoch posted: “Boo hoo! This is NOT an acceptable entry for > Susanna Hill’s Halloweensie Contest (over by 4 words), but I thought I’d > post my adaptation of a Storytime action-rhyme for teachers, parents, > librarians – or another bookseller! – who might enjoy boo-hooing w” >

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  2. I love it. I may tuck it in my pocket for our first grade party tomorrow in case they get rowdy! (When they get rowdy is more likely!!) Please, cut the last stanza so you can enter! Or just go with 2 repetition on words – even though the syllables are off then, every time i read it I add a pause anyway for the action so the meter reads fine that way too.

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  3. This is so delightful and fun, Julie! What fun kids would have with this! And so beautifully presented on the orange background with the dropping spider – so artfully done! I counted the words myself – 104, you are right 😦 But WONDERFUL job! Thanks for joining in!

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